Draining my renewable energy
After a frustrating four months we appear to have an air source heating system at our house which effectively (and we hope efficiently) powers our heating and hot water. The process of specification, installation and commissioning of this new "state of the art" renewable energy system has been a long and arduous process to endure. It's been a classic case of the need for the leaders of the manufacturer, supplier and installation teams to demonstrate collaborative leadership.
In the book by David Archer and Alex Cameron, "Collaborative Leadership - How to succeed in an interconnected world" the authors state that collaborative leadership is "about delivering results across boundaries"
Points of Interdependence
I recommend that the leaders involved in our heating system sit down and discuss how they can work collaboratively in the future to save time, energy and stress for their teams and their customers. A
few concepts from Archer and Cameron's book are useful to any leader in today's interconnected world.
I was amazed to read in Archer and Cameron's book that the management of London underground is organised around the different tube lines, so the people who work on the Jubilee line are managed by a different organisation than say the Victoria line. This is fine for most of the time, but at an interchange station - Green Park, for example staff need to know how the Jubilee, Victoria and Piccadilly lines are running and need to be kept up to date on all three. This point of interdependence is critical because if a breakdown occurs somewhere along one of the lines, trains and stations start to get very crowded and a point of interdependence comes into play - the platform edge.
The platform edge is one of the points at greatest risk to the system for obvious reasons - a packed commuter train opening its doors at a station which is also packed with commuters could have serious implications. So therefore leaders need to work out what are their own points of interdependence and what needs to be communicated, when and how between partnerships. So, it's a good idea to pinpoint your own"Green Parks" and know where your potential "platform edges" lie in order to focus management time and effort and where you can leave (and trust) individual partners to do their own thing well.
A final thought from the book, in a letter from jail in 1963, Martin Luther King wrote "We are caught in an inescapable network of mutuality, tied in a single garment of destiny. Whatever affects one directly affects all indirectly"
Drained of all energy
Unfortunately, I am writing this dressed in two fleeces and a woolly hat as our underfloor heating system is still not working - apparently it's a commmunication failure somewhere in the system....
Wednesday, 19 October 2011
Tuesday, 18 October 2011
Appreciative Inquiry - Conversations with real purpose
I really like a definition of coaching by Julie Starr, which is that coaching is "a conversation with a purpose" Coaching centres around asking useful questions which cause people to move on.
Appreciative Inquiry (often known as AI) takes the same approach. AI was developed by David Cooperrider and Suresh Srivastva in the 1980s. The approach is based on the premise that
"organisations change in the direction in which they inquire.’
So an organisation which inquires into problems will keep finding problems but an organisation which attempts to appreciate what is best in itself will discover more and more that is good. It can then to use these discoveries to build a new future where the best becomes more common Cooperrider and Srivastva contrast the commonplace notion that, ―organising is a problem to be solved‖ with the appreciative proposition that, ―organising is a miracle to be embraced.
Inquiry into organisational life, they say, should have four characteristics. It should be:- Appreciative
- Applicable
- Provocative
- Collaborative
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| Appreciative Inquiry 4 D Cycle |
Appreciative Inquiry is a particular way of asking questions and envisioning the future that
fosters positive relationships and builds on the basic goodness in a person, a situation, or an
organization. In so doing, it enhances a system's capacity for collaboration and change.
Appreciative Inquiry uses a cycle of 4 processes focusing on:
1. DISCOVER: The identification of organisational processes that work well.2. DREAM: The envisioning of processes that would work well in the future.
3. DESIGN: Planning and prioritising processes that would work well.
4. DESTINY (or DELIVER): The implementation (execution) of the proposed design.
The basic idea is to build organisations around what works, rather than trying to fix what doesn't. It is the opposite of problem solving. Instead of focusing on gaps and inadequacies
to remediate skills or practices.
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Monday, 17 October 2011
Team building - Do good and feel good!
Creating Social Capital
Funny how memories flood back sometimes.... I remember painting the walls of my Sunday School at Hollinwood Working Men's Bible Mission as one of the best Team Building activities of my life! It was a frenetic activity that involved anyone who turned up and was a great opportunity to "do good and feel good!" Forty years on, the memory is as clear as ever.
As companies look to invest their CSR time and energy in team building activities that have the best possible pay back many are turning to Team Building for Charity. In their paper, EMPLOYEE VOLUNTEERING AND SOCIAL CAPITAL: CONTRIBUTIONS TO CORPORATE SOCIAL RESPONSIBILITY, Judy N. Muthuri et al (2007) state that " Benefits claimed by employee volunteers include sharing knowledge, acquiring new skills, insights into community issues, new perspectives on their own business and inner satisfaction. The volunteers also build internal networks which become supports in the workplace and contribute to further volunteer recruitment."
So when you are thinking about a Team Building activity which adds real value to the individual, your organisation and the chosen charity consider the Social Capital Matrix below
Funny how memories flood back sometimes.... I remember painting the walls of my Sunday School at Hollinwood Working Men's Bible Mission as one of the best Team Building activities of my life! It was a frenetic activity that involved anyone who turned up and was a great opportunity to "do good and feel good!" Forty years on, the memory is as clear as ever.
As companies look to invest their CSR time and energy in team building activities that have the best possible pay back many are turning to Team Building for Charity. In their paper, EMPLOYEE VOLUNTEERING AND SOCIAL CAPITAL: CONTRIBUTIONS TO CORPORATE SOCIAL RESPONSIBILITY, Judy N. Muthuri et al (2007) state that " Benefits claimed by employee volunteers include sharing knowledge, acquiring new skills, insights into community issues, new perspectives on their own business and inner satisfaction. The volunteers also build internal networks which become supports in the workplace and contribute to further volunteer recruitment."
So when you are thinking about a Team Building activity which adds real value to the individual, your organisation and the chosen charity consider the Social Capital Matrix below
Creating Co-operation
"Those involved evealed that their capacity to cooperate depends on bringing some comparative advantage into the relationship. Thus companies partner charities because they are reputable and have expertise regarding social issues. They partner brokers because of their networking competencies. They partner employees because they can actualise the employee volunteering programmes. These relationships are characterised by mutual dependence with actors taking risks in investing their time and resources for a shared goal with no assurance of future benefits. In this web of employee volunteering interactions, cooperative behaviour is cultivated, the existing social structure is exploited and new social capital is created"
Contact us fhttp://www.longden-events.co.uk/ or Team Building ideas to enable your team to do good, feel good and increase cooperation.
.Saturday, 21 August 2010
Bloom's taxonomy and Moodle
This is useful when designing a programme of learning.
http://mentors.moodlerooms.com/file.php/1/media/ARTICULATE_ENGAGE/bloom/engage.html
http://mentors.moodlerooms.com/file.php/1/media/ARTICULATE_ENGAGE/bloom/engage.html
Thursday, 4 February 2010
Not everything in the garden is Rosicrucian
Do you know what the Rosicrucian cipher looks like? If you don't, I guess that you would Google it.
The Wiki definition is http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pigpen_cipher and defines it as "The pigpen cipher (sometimes referred to as the masonic cipher, Freemason's cipher, or Rosicrucian cipher) is a geometric simple substitution cipher which exchanges letters for symbols which are fragments of a grid"
This week my company http://www.longden.co.uk/ begins its quest to encourage 1000 people to become "On Liners using the easy and enjoyable e-learning modules on http://www.onlinebasics.co.uk/
The Wiki definition is http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pigpen_cipher and defines it as "The pigpen cipher (sometimes referred to as the masonic cipher, Freemason's cipher, or Rosicrucian cipher) is a geometric simple substitution cipher which exchanges letters for symbols which are fragments of a grid"
I have been surprised this week by how many people in the UK (13.9 million) have never used a computer, nor been Online. This was brought into focus as my company http://www.longden.co.uk/ ran an experiential team event for 20 people, the vast majority of whom almost ran away screaming when we brought out laptops to assist the learning process. Only one person was brave enough to use the internet to search for the Rosicrucian Cipher, which would crack the code to give the all important "key to the bar". The team comprised "Comfortable Off Liners"
Other examples of "Off Liners" this week are:
- A close colleague, "Gill" who still has her secretary print off his emails as she is unable/unwilling to learn how to use email.
- A friend who has to go to the library to read her emails as she cannot get the broadband to work at home
- Attempting to run training sessions at three local venues which had to be abandoned because the WiFi connection was not working
This week my company http://www.longden.co.uk/ begins its quest to encourage 1000 people to become "On Liners using the easy and enjoyable e-learning modules on http://www.onlinebasics.co.uk/
Wednesday, 27 January 2010
How to handle complexity and how to prepare for the unexpected - A checklist approach
Checklists
We have four light switches in our hallway. Every morning, I try at least two before I switch on the right light. Should I mark the switches?
Yesterday, I gave my partner the alarm code to my office, so that he could (very kindly) finish off some decorating work. My only way to remember the code is visual. I look at the keypad and punch in the numbers unconsciously. So, he is surprised when I cannot remember the numbers and in what sequence. Well, he rang from his mobile with the sound of the alarm (which was blasting VERY LOUDLY) and desperately punching in the numbers I had given him. Unfortunately, only a call to my colleague confirmed that I had given him the right numbers, but in the wrong order! Should I have the code along with all my usernames and passwords tattooed on my arm?
We all make mistakes and some key questions in designing blended learning are:
A checklist can help.
According to a report in the Telegraph recently, 82 patients underwent operations on wrong part of body. The World Health Organisation has devised a surgical checklist, similar to pre-flight checks between pilots, designed to eliminate errors through miscommunication.
Many NHS trusts have adopted the WHO checklist as a routine safety measure. http://www.telegraph.co.uk/health/healthnews/6685336/Hospitals-82-patients-underwent-operations-on-wrong-part-of-body.html
What checklists would help you in everyday life and what would a checklist for designing and delivering blended learning look like? Watch this space!
We have four light switches in our hallway. Every morning, I try at least two before I switch on the right light. Should I mark the switches?
Yesterday, I gave my partner the alarm code to my office, so that he could (very kindly) finish off some decorating work. My only way to remember the code is visual. I look at the keypad and punch in the numbers unconsciously. So, he is surprised when I cannot remember the numbers and in what sequence. Well, he rang from his mobile with the sound of the alarm (which was blasting VERY LOUDLY) and desperately punching in the numbers I had given him. Unfortunately, only a call to my colleague confirmed that I had given him the right numbers, but in the wrong order! Should I have the code along with all my usernames and passwords tattooed on my arm?
We all make mistakes and some key questions in designing blended learning are:
- How do we handle complexity?
- How do you prepare yourself for the unexpected?
- How do you do it well and not just a tick box exercise?
A checklist can help.
According to a report in the Telegraph recently, 82 patients underwent operations on wrong part of body. The World Health Organisation has devised a surgical checklist, similar to pre-flight checks between pilots, designed to eliminate errors through miscommunication.
Many NHS trusts have adopted the WHO checklist as a routine safety measure. http://www.telegraph.co.uk/health/healthnews/6685336/Hospitals-82-patients-underwent-operations-on-wrong-part-of-body.html
What checklists would help you in everyday life and what would a checklist for designing and delivering blended learning look like? Watch this space!
Wednesday, 20 January 2010
Accounting for myself!
Payment on account
Today I received a letter from my accountant, which had the opposite effect to what I normally experience... sheer joy and relief. I am owed a rebate because of the odd and unexplainable notion of "Payment on account".
Apparently I had paid way too much last year "On account" - I didn't plan to, nor wanted to - but the net effect is positive - the tax man owes me a lot of money.
Also today, I had to account for my actions in my action research project and have come to the conclusion that I may be in "research deficit" by a LONG way! Have I squandered my time over the last three months - or has it been one of the best investments of my life???
Scarman House at Warwick University has been the claustrophobic and fattening food rich backdrop to my research ramblings, with 17 IFL/LSIS fellowship holders. I currently feel a bit like my accountant must feel as she tries to gather all of the information ahe needs to make an assessment of my liability. The information is available but not necessarily in the shape or form they need.
Key learning points are:
Today I received a letter from my accountant, which had the opposite effect to what I normally experience... sheer joy and relief. I am owed a rebate because of the odd and unexplainable notion of "Payment on account".
Apparently I had paid way too much last year "On account" - I didn't plan to, nor wanted to - but the net effect is positive - the tax man owes me a lot of money.
Also today, I had to account for my actions in my action research project and have come to the conclusion that I may be in "research deficit" by a LONG way! Have I squandered my time over the last three months - or has it been one of the best investments of my life???
Scarman House at Warwick University has been the claustrophobic and fattening food rich backdrop to my research ramblings, with 17 IFL/LSIS fellowship holders. I currently feel a bit like my accountant must feel as she tries to gather all of the information ahe needs to make an assessment of my liability. The information is available but not necessarily in the shape or form they need.
Key learning points are:
- Make the question explicit
- Define the "creative ways"
- Define the context
- Be clear about the methodology
- Identify the implications for practice
Social Learning - Minds on Fire: Open Education, the Long Tail, and Learning 2.0 - John Seely Brown and Richard P. Adler 2008
Social Learning
Minds on Fire: Open Education, the Long Tail, and Learning 2.0 - John Seely Brown and Richard P. Adler 2008 EDUCAUSE Review, vol. 43, no. 1 (January/February 2008)
http://trainingshare.com/SFX7EED.pdf
"The most profound impact of the Internet, an impact that has yet to be fully realized, is its ability to support and expand the various aspects of social learning. What do we mean by “social learning”? Perhaps the simplest way to explain this concept is to note that social learning is based on the premise that our understanding of content is socially constructed through conversations about that content and through grounded interactions, especially with others, around problems or actions. The focus is not so much on what we are learning but on how we are learning.5 Compelling evidence for the importance of social interaction to learning comes from the landmark study by Richard J. Light, of the Harvard Graduate School of Education, of students’ college/university experience. Light discovered that one of the strongest determinants of students’ success in higher education— more important than the details of their instructors’ teaching styles—was their ability to form or participate in small study groups. Students who studied in groups, even only once a week, were more engaged in their studies, were better prepared for class, and learned significantly more than students who worked on their own.
The emphasis on social learning stands in sharp contrast to the traditional Cartesian view of knowledge and learning—a view that has largely dominated the way education has been structured for over one hundred years. The Cartesian perspective assumes that knowledge is a kind of substance and that pedagogy concerns the best way to transfer this substance from teachers to students. By contrast, instead of starting from the Cartesian premise of “I think, therefore I am,” and from the assumption that knowledge is something that is transferred to the student via various pedagogical strategies, the social view of learning says, “We participate, therefore we are.”
Minds on Fire: Open Education, the Long Tail, and Learning 2.0 - John Seely Brown and Richard P. Adler 2008 EDUCAUSE Review, vol. 43, no. 1 (January/February 2008)
http://trainingshare.com/SFX7EED.pdf
"The most profound impact of the Internet, an impact that has yet to be fully realized, is its ability to support and expand the various aspects of social learning. What do we mean by “social learning”? Perhaps the simplest way to explain this concept is to note that social learning is based on the premise that our understanding of content is socially constructed through conversations about that content and through grounded interactions, especially with others, around problems or actions. The focus is not so much on what we are learning but on how we are learning.5 Compelling evidence for the importance of social interaction to learning comes from the landmark study by Richard J. Light, of the Harvard Graduate School of Education, of students’ college/university experience. Light discovered that one of the strongest determinants of students’ success in higher education— more important than the details of their instructors’ teaching styles—was their ability to form or participate in small study groups. Students who studied in groups, even only once a week, were more engaged in their studies, were better prepared for class, and learned significantly more than students who worked on their own.
The emphasis on social learning stands in sharp contrast to the traditional Cartesian view of knowledge and learning—a view that has largely dominated the way education has been structured for over one hundred years. The Cartesian perspective assumes that knowledge is a kind of substance and that pedagogy concerns the best way to transfer this substance from teachers to students. By contrast, instead of starting from the Cartesian premise of “I think, therefore I am,” and from the assumption that knowledge is something that is transferred to the student via various pedagogical strategies, the social view of learning says, “We participate, therefore we are.”
Khan’s Octagonal Framework 2007
Khan’s Octagonal Framework 2007
Program Evaluation in E-Learning
http://74.220.207.68/~federall/pages/pdfs%20of%20wht%20papers/elearning_program_evaluation_by_khan_and_Granato.pdf
"A variety of factors are required to be addressed to create a meaningful learning environment. Each dimension in the framework represents a category of issues that need to be addressed. These issues help organize thinking, and ensure that the resulting learning program creates a meaningful learning experience."
Program Evaluation in E-Learning
http://74.220.207.68/~federall/pages/pdfs%20of%20wht%20papers/elearning_program_evaluation_by_khan_and_Granato.pdf
"A variety of factors are required to be addressed to create a meaningful learning environment. Each dimension in the framework represents a category of issues that need to be addressed. These issues help organize thinking, and ensure that the resulting learning program creates a meaningful learning experience."
Thriving in the 21st century: Learning Literacies for the Digital Age (LLiDA project)
Learning Literacies for the Digital Age
http://www.jisc.ac.uk/media/documents/projects/llidareportjune2009.pdf
"The texture of social life is changing, with more and more people conducting and sustaining relationships via digital media. Many social practices, from purchasing to voting to registering for healthcare, can now be conducted online. In its recent statement on Digital Britain‘, the Government expresses an active intention to enhance this trend, and lists media literacies and IT skills‘ second only after access to the internet as a requirement for building a society of empowered and informed consumers and citizens".
Trends shaping technology and community, from Wenger et al (2005), are:
http://www.jisc.ac.uk/media/documents/projects/llidareportjune2009.pdf
"The texture of social life is changing, with more and more people conducting and sustaining relationships via digital media. Many social practices, from purchasing to voting to registering for healthcare, can now be conducted online. In its recent statement on Digital Britain‘, the Government expresses an active intention to enhance this trend, and lists media literacies and IT skills‘ second only after access to the internet as a requirement for building a society of empowered and informed consumers and citizens".
Trends shaping technology and community, from Wenger et al (2005), are:
- Fabric of connectivity – always on, virtual presence
- Modes of engagement – generalised self-expression, mass collaboration, creative re-appropriation
- Active medium – social computing, semantic web, digital footprint
- Reconfigured geographies – homesteading of the web, individualisation of orientation
- Modulating polarities – togetherness and separation, interacting and publishing, individual and group
- Dealing with multiplicity – competing services, multi-membership, thin connections
- New communities – multi-space, multi-scale, dynamic boundaries, social learning spaces.
Community of Inquiry Garrison and Vaughan 2008
Community of Inquiry
Blended learning, in the eyes of Garrison and Vaughan is not simply embedding educational technology into face-to-face instruction. Rather than suggesting “what and how” type of questions as Salmon did, they precisely introduce a holistic, reflective and self-sustainable Community of Inquiry Framework grounding on a strong educational theory.
It acts as a conceptual tool that helps the academics and blended learning practitioners who wish to evaluate and position the value of blended learning. If there is one point of criticism, it is that assessment - an important element of learning and teaching is not depicted in the framework.
Blended learning, in the eyes of Garrison and Vaughan is not simply embedding educational technology into face-to-face instruction. Rather than suggesting “what and how” type of questions as Salmon did, they precisely introduce a holistic, reflective and self-sustainable Community of Inquiry Framework grounding on a strong educational theory.
It acts as a conceptual tool that helps the academics and blended learning practitioners who wish to evaluate and position the value of blended learning. If there is one point of criticism, it is that assessment - an important element of learning and teaching is not depicted in the framework.
The Blended Learning Continuum - Norah Jones, 2008
The Blended Learning Continuum
“It is challenging to find a widely accepted definition of blended learning, and even more difficult to find a core set of literature on blended learning mythologies or framework.”
With the consideration for all arguments against no standard models for blended learning, Professor Norah Jones at the University of Glamorgan suggests that the continuum of blended learning is a better guideline instead of a stage-like model for institutional wide adoption.
“It is challenging to find a widely accepted definition of blended learning, and even more difficult to find a core set of literature on blended learning mythologies or framework.”
With the consideration for all arguments against no standard models for blended learning, Professor Norah Jones at the University of Glamorgan suggests that the continuum of blended learning is a better guideline instead of a stage-like model for institutional wide adoption.
A Critical Review of the Blended Learning Models - Chew, Jones, Turner 2008
What shall we have for dinner?
This is the most complex question to answer when there are so many choices available, with so many fresh ingredients, ready made meals, options to eat out etc, etc. Also, because there are so many choices, we often waste food and end up wishing we had made a different decision. Trying to make decisions about how to design and deliver blended learning is as complex as deciding what to have for dinner.
There are many frameworks available from the current literature and my next few blog posts will illustrate those that I will be putting in my "kitchen" for use later on. I also feel at this stage that the framework I need does not yet exist. So I will be "collecting ideas" and then inventing my own "blender for blended learning". Although, that is not necessarily a good idea as I gave my own Blender to the charity shop when we moved two years ago, after it sat in the cupboard for 20 years unused!! I feel that a new metaphor will be needed...
Anyway here is one useful review:
Critical Review of the Blended Learning Models based on Maslow’s and Vygotsky’s Educational Theory,
Esyin Chew, Norah Jones, David Turner
http://www.cs.cityu.edu.hk/~ichl2008/LNCS-Proceedings/ICHL2008_EsyinChew_14pages.pdf
Also:
An Ecology Framework
Wenger and Ferguson MS Wenger, C Ferguson - The Handbook of Blended Learning, 2005 - Pfeiffer & Co, describe how Sun Microsystem corporate adopted an ecology framework as a guide to their blended learning model.
They suggest five important backgrounds as
(1) Quality of Learning experience;
(2) Control over Learning Experience;
(3) Formal versus informal learning;
(4) Social nature of learning;
(5) Cost effectiveness.
This is the most complex question to answer when there are so many choices available, with so many fresh ingredients, ready made meals, options to eat out etc, etc. Also, because there are so many choices, we often waste food and end up wishing we had made a different decision. Trying to make decisions about how to design and deliver blended learning is as complex as deciding what to have for dinner.
There are many frameworks available from the current literature and my next few blog posts will illustrate those that I will be putting in my "kitchen" for use later on. I also feel at this stage that the framework I need does not yet exist. So I will be "collecting ideas" and then inventing my own "blender for blended learning". Although, that is not necessarily a good idea as I gave my own Blender to the charity shop when we moved two years ago, after it sat in the cupboard for 20 years unused!! I feel that a new metaphor will be needed...
Anyway here is one useful review:
Critical Review of the Blended Learning Models based on Maslow’s and Vygotsky’s Educational Theory,
Esyin Chew, Norah Jones, David Turner
http://www.cs.cityu.edu.hk/~ichl2008/LNCS-Proceedings/ICHL2008_EsyinChew_14pages.pdf
Also:
An Ecology Framework
Wenger and Ferguson MS Wenger, C Ferguson - The Handbook of Blended Learning, 2005 - Pfeiffer & Co, describe how Sun Microsystem corporate adopted an ecology framework as a guide to their blended learning model.
They suggest five important backgrounds as
(1) Quality of Learning experience;
(2) Control over Learning Experience;
(3) Formal versus informal learning;
(4) Social nature of learning;
(5) Cost effectiveness.
Tuesday, 19 January 2010
Writing for research - tips and techniques
On the day that Cadbury is taken over by Kraft, I have given up eating chocolate, and may have replaced it with something even more addictive - WRITING!
Am I breaking any rules today by writing what I have just learnt about - which is writing for research - on my blog?
I feel as though I have eaten twenty Cadbury's selection boxes and have a bizarre buzz, a headache and feel sick at the same time.
Like a yummy selection box, there are so many ideas to choose from, the difficulty is selecting what words what will satisfy and how many words are just enough.
Having just taken part in a very useful discussion at Warwick University with 20 IFL research fellows, I now summarise my learning. These are tips that I will apply as I write up my action research about Blended Learning.
As George Orwell said, " Probably it is better to put off using words as long as possible and get one's meaning as clear as one can through pictures or sensations"
The other night my desk lamp would not switch on, so I changed the bulb but it didn't do the trick. I couldn't find a screwdriver to open the plug and change the fuse, so I broke it open with a knife. I feel that this is my approach to writing! I don't know the problem and I don't have the right tools or know how to use them - and so I stay in the semi-dark! Some wise words that illuminate my thinking are below:
Some rules about writing from George Orwell (written in 1946) are:
Am I breaking any rules today by writing what I have just learnt about - which is writing for research - on my blog?
I feel as though I have eaten twenty Cadbury's selection boxes and have a bizarre buzz, a headache and feel sick at the same time.
Like a yummy selection box, there are so many ideas to choose from, the difficulty is selecting what words what will satisfy and how many words are just enough.
Having just taken part in a very useful discussion at Warwick University with 20 IFL research fellows, I now summarise my learning. These are tips that I will apply as I write up my action research about Blended Learning.
As George Orwell said, " Probably it is better to put off using words as long as possible and get one's meaning as clear as one can through pictures or sensations"
The other night my desk lamp would not switch on, so I changed the bulb but it didn't do the trick. I couldn't find a screwdriver to open the plug and change the fuse, so I broke it open with a knife. I feel that this is my approach to writing! I don't know the problem and I don't have the right tools or know how to use them - and so I stay in the semi-dark! Some wise words that illuminate my thinking are below:
Some rules about writing from George Orwell (written in 1946) are:
- Never use a metaphor, simile or other figure of speech which you are used to seeing in print
- Never use a long word where a short word will do
- If it is possible to cut out a word, always cut it out
- Never use the passive where you can use the active
- Never use a foreign phrase, a scientific word or a jargon word if you can think of an everyday English equivalent
Other valuable tips that I will apply, from Frank Coffield are:
"You give away your values with your adjectives and adverbs"
"Answer the following questions,
What has surprised me?
How do I feel about that and what does that do?
What is the black swan in this situation?"
A final thought about what is bad writing "The staleness of the imagery, the lack of precision"
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